Friends of Nimrodel: Tapestry of Dreams - Discussion - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

mark12_30 · 03-26-2004, 04:13 AM

I see you, lmp... Hmmm, three pursuers on horseback. What's a weary elf-man to do?... ...Nuru, Aylwen?

Orual, **great** post! Ravion fascinates me.

mark12_30 · 03-26-2004, 01:29 PM

Ravion is not alone; he shares his vice with an ancient elf-lord, apparently.

ps. As long as they are in-character-and-canon, and don't turn the entire storyline inside out-- please, please, don't be shy about plot twists and surprises. I like 'em. Go ahead and put them into the storyline. If they're way out, we can complain on the discussion thread and edits can be made. So if in doubt-- try it! We can always edit. And the game moves more quickly, and is more challenging that way.

alaklondewen · 03-26-2004, 02:55 PM

I've posted Erebemlin's first post. I do apologize for its short length, but I was uncomfortable taking him further as the point of the post might be lost. Please let me know if anything needs to be edited.

Thanks!

~ Alak

mark12_30 · 03-26-2004, 03:36 PM

alak, your post was great! The length, I thought, was just right.

I only had one question on the use of "intellection"? I'm no English major! But I wondered...

I loved the hints you put in.

Nuru-- you and I cross-posted, and I didn't see it til just now. Good thing it worked out! I don't think any editing is neccessary. (Wow, huh?) Loved your post, especially the aprt about Liornung habitually talking to himself!

osanwe thread

alaklondewen · 03-26-2004, 03:48 PM

Thanks, Helen.

I went back over that section, and I reworded it slightly. There should be no question now.

Aylwen Dreamsong · 03-27-2004, 11:42 AM

Posted! I did a lot with all the other Rohan characters in my post, so Nuru, lmp, and Helen, if you want me to change anything let me know and it will be taken care of!

-Aylwen

mark12_30 · 03-27-2004, 12:53 PM

Hi Aylwen! Good post! I like Bellyn's compassion, and it will probably be the best key for the group to work with Amroth. The contrast between the appearance of Mellon's body and the activity of Amroth's mind and spirit is lots of fun!

One change-- I don't think anyone had dismounted. The whole horse-"stealing" scene takes place as the three are approaching Mellon-Amroth, and happens in maybe ten seconds. I picture Ædegard's temper flaring, but I wanted to leave that up to lmp!

03-26-2004, 04:13 AM	#1
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	I see you, lmp... Hmmm, three pursuers on horseback. What's a weary elf-man to do?... ...Nuru, Aylwen? Orual, great post! Ravion fascinates me. __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.

03-26-2004, 01:29 PM	#2
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	another horse-thief Ravion is not alone; he shares his vice with an ancient elf-lord, apparently. ps. As long as they are in-character-and-canon, and don't turn the entire storyline inside out-- please, please, don't be shy about plot twists and surprises. I like 'em. Go ahead and put them into the storyline. If they're way out, we can complain on the discussion thread and edits can be made. So if in doubt-- try it! We can always edit. And the game moves more quickly, and is more challenging that way. __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve. Last edited by mark12_30; 03-26-2004 at 01:39 PM.

03-26-2004, 02:55 PM	#3
alaklondewen Song of Seregon Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Following the road less traveled Posts: 1,193	I've posted Erebemlin's first post. I do apologize for its short length, but I was uncomfortable taking him further as the point of the post might be lost. Please let me know if anything needs to be edited. Thanks! ~ Alak __________________ At last I understand why we have waited! This is the ending. Now not day only shall be beloved, but night too shall be beautiful and blessed and all its fear pass away!

03-26-2004, 03:36 PM	#4
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	loved it. alak, your post was great! The length, I thought, was just right. I only had one question on the use of "intellection"? I'm no English major! But I wondered... I loved the hints you put in. Nuru-- you and I cross-posted, and I didn't see it til just now. Good thing it worked out! I don't think any editing is neccessary. (Wow, huh?) Loved your post, especially the aprt about Liornung habitually talking to himself! osanwe thread __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve. Last edited by mark12_30; 03-26-2004 at 03:42 PM.

03-26-2004, 03:48 PM	#5
alaklondewen Song of Seregon Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Following the road less traveled Posts: 1,193	Thanks, Helen. I went back over that section, and I reworded it slightly. There should be no question now. __________________ At last I understand why we have waited! This is the ending. Now not day only shall be beloved, but night too shall be beautiful and blessed and all its fear pass away!

03-27-2004, 11:42 AM	#6
Aylwen Dreamsong The Melody of Misery Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)... Posts: 1,147	Posted! I did a lot with all the other Rohan characters in my post, so Nuru, lmp, and Helen, if you want me to change anything let me know and it will be taken care of! -Aylwen __________________ ...Come down now, they'll say. But everything looks perfect from far away - Come down now! But we'll stay.

03-27-2004, 12:53 PM	#7
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	leading vs riding Hi Aylwen! Good post! I like Bellyn's compassion, and it will probably be the best key for the group to work with Amroth. The contrast between the appearance of Mellon's body and the activity of Amroth's mind and spirit is lots of fun! One change-- I don't think anyone had dismounted. The whole horse-"stealing" scene takes place as the three are approaching Mellon-Amroth, and happens in maybe ten seconds. I picture Ædegard's temper flaring, but I wanted to leave that up to lmp! __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.