Of the Coming of Men Into the West

[Elvellon]

Originally Posted by Findegil

Okay, I see now your point. So you think that we should skip Bëor's mentioning of the Folk of Haleth waiting fo rtiddings east of Ered Luin or are suggesting that we should skip all the talk between Felagund and Bëor about the other Atani?

To skipping the waiting for meassage, I would be okay with that. But that he did know about the others is at least for the Folk of Marach asured in DW and I don't see why he should not have knowledge of the wandering Haladin as well.

Respectfully
Findegil

Oh no, not that drastic. I would just remove ", awaiting tidings before they venture further".